This is a solid start Louis, you show some understanding of two critical frameworks here - accurate use of concepts. However, to secure a L4. you would need to use the PRezi in a more effective way to present your ideas visually; use a range of screenshots, with key points, rather than a paragraph in a circle and a screenshot below. Also, you should analyse more frames from the video - considering visual signifiers, how they construct the star image and how the video links to the album cover.
Well done for responding to feedback. You have added more detail to this analysis and improved it significantly - some perceptive observations. However, you could still link some, especially final part, directly back to Dyer. The key is to apply a theoretical concept thoroughly. See me for some pointers
This is a solid start Louis, you show some understanding of two critical frameworks here - accurate use of concepts. However, to secure a L4. you would need to use the PRezi in a more effective way to present your ideas visually; use a range of screenshots, with key points, rather than a paragraph in a circle and a screenshot below. Also, you should analyse more frames from the video - considering visual signifiers, how they construct the star image and how the video links to the album cover.
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ReplyDeleteWell done for responding to feedback. You have added more detail to this analysis and improved it significantly - some perceptive observations. However, you could still link some, especially final part, directly back to Dyer. The key is to apply a theoretical concept thoroughly. See me for some pointers
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